обещанное сочинение, надеюсь учительнице Ямапи оно понравится

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Yamashita Tomohisa is one of the six members of Japanese pop-group "NEWS", which was formed by Johnny's Entertainment. Yamashita started working in JE when he was 11. At the same time he started acting in films.
He`s been working hard for many years combining concert tours, singing, dancing and acting with his studies. And he`s achieved excellent results. Yamashita has become the leader of News. He also has a lot of awards for acting.
Yamashita doesn`t like to lose. If he starts doing something he does his best. So when he graduated from university last year he was one of the most famous and successful people in Japan thanks to his diligence and responsible attitude to his work.
He`s very communicative and caring. He treats his junior colleagues like father.
My attitude towards him might be too subjective because I'm a fan but I really admire his talent.